There are four secret weapons in the marketing copywriter's arsenal that can have immense power.
1. You

It's the most powerful word in the English language. For most marketers, It's more influential than words like 'money' and 'sex.' Your customers want to feel like you're talking to them directly and the word 'you' does that better than any other word.
Whether we like to admit it or not, we're all a bit egocentric. When promotional copy (or product descriptions / ads) focus directly on us, a powerful subconscious connection is created.
Here's an example of an online retailer who uses the word 'you' in their product descriptions to increase their conversion rate:
“The Epson ES1000 Ultra Portable Tabletop Projection Screen is the ultimate screen for mobile professionals. Whether you're walking across town, commuting by car or flying to your next destination, this lightweight, compact screen is the perfect traveling partner for on-the-go presentations. When you're ready to present, the Epson ES1000 Ultra Portable Tabletop Projection Screen's unique one-piece design allows you to set up quickly and easily on any tabletop in less than 30 seconds. It conveniently accommodates up to a 50" (diagonal) image. When it's time to shut down, the Epson ES1000 Ultra Portable Tabletop Projection Screen stores quickly and easily in just seconds.” (Source, TigerDirect)
A form of the word 'you' appears 4 times in this clever marketing copy. Notice that the narrative is focused on how this portable projector makes the shopper's life easier. It's solving a problem that most prospects have.
Take a look at all of your ecommerce product descriptions and make sure you're addressing your prospects directly. Use words like "you," "your," and all similar forms to make a connection with your customers and potentially increase sales.
2. New

When you see the word 'new' you subconsciously think improved, exciting, and I want. According to several behavioral psychology studies, new products, novel solutions, and a sense of adventure draw shoppers to products with the 'new' label.
"I might have my own favorite choice of chocolate bar, but if I see a different bar repackaged, advertising its ‘new, improved flavor,’ my search for novel experiences may encourage me to move away from my usual choice."
3. Free

4. Guaranteed

wooow!!!!! what a GREAT, NEW, FREE, post YOU guys wrote!
Haha, thanks Alexandre.
Do you think I should have titled my blog article “NEW FREE Guide to Teach YOU 4 Words to Increase Sales GUARANTEED” ???
…. I thought about it. :)
Wait a couple weeks, and you’ll see “NEW FREE Guide to Teach YOU GUARANTEED!” all over the internet.
Definitely just made our list for split testing :)
Yes, a great free new article, guaranteed to satisfy!
Thanks!
VERY helpful right at this point.
LOL I love the pic of the sleazy car salesman.
@Mark Tempting as it may have been I think you made the right choice!
Free is very powerful. When Amazon was charging $1 for shipping their sales were lower than expected. They made it free and it increased about 20%.
Josh: I sure hope so!
Katie: Thanks so much, I’m glad you found it useful.
Kris: Haha, I love it too. I have way too much fun searching the stock image sites and Flickr hunting for the perfect images for the blog.
Good post Mark. I think this a useful summary of good copy.
I’m wondering how perceptions of these terms will change as frequency of use increases. Based on the research I do, I have a hunch trustworthiness will largely impact the effectiveness of each phrase.
Which should naturally lead us to the question…what influences trustworthiness? This is a topic I’ve been spending a lot of time with lately.
Kev: Absolutely. Trustworthiness is paramount in selling online. Nobody is going to give you their credit card number if they don’t trust you.
It’s very important that merchants don’t simply pepper their marketing copy with false promises!
If a product isn’t new, don’t call it new. If it’s not free, don’t say it’s free (that’s illegal). Also, don’t misuse ‘guaranteed’ – and this is the word that’s most often used maliciously. It’s fairly easy to trick a customer into thinking a purchase is ‘guaranteed’ but in reality, there’s a laundry list of conditions.
Thanks for stopping by Kev, and I really appreciate your comment!
FANTASTIC article Mark, a lot of ‘food for thought’. We offer free shipping on all of our products but I would be interested to see the conversion rates and difference in average sale value if we moved this to free shipping for all products over a certain amount. Will try it out and see how this affects figures.
Jessie: Thanks so much! I’m really interested to hear how your experiment goes. Please do let me know the results!
Great stuff..Simple but powerful…I’m newbie who’s just trying to get into this on business of affiliate marketing..
twitter/face book?
Ruben: Thanks a lot. We have a great affiliate program, check out http://www.shopify.com/partners
Mark – your post inspired us to try something new! This weekend we tested out “Buy two shirts get free shipping.” We’ve done free shipping before but never tied it to the amount of product customers purchased. Almost 90% of customers purchased two or more shirts! This was a significant change for our norm.
Thanks for the advice, you’re responsible for a great weekend of sales!
Thanks,
Amy & Emily Jolly
Nice quick morning reminder, thanks Mark!
I would add a caution about the word “new”. It turns off a large segment of people because (depending on context/industry) it also implies “untested, unproven, lacking history, not backwards compatible, potentially flawed, risky, etc.”
Although new things will appeal to people in many cases (as you note with candy & clothing), be careful with older audiences and specific industries where history, stability, proof, and guaranteed performance are key.
Cheers, have a great day!
Amy & Emily Jolly: I am SO thrilled to hear such wonderful news. Congratulations, and thanks so much for letting me know about your pricing test! :-) :-)
Jeff: Excellent advice, your’e absolutely right.
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Hello and thank you for such a great read!
My question is what would you recommend for guarantees on digital downloads?
Thank you and have an amazing day!
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Peace be upon you,
Really I fond you guys active at new articles for distributing free knowledge with guaranteed improvements of readers.
Thank (you) for this (free) article. (Now) that I know these tips will
(guarantee) increase sells on my site: sonarta.com , they will be in every copy I send out.
Great Job!
Hi I am new to the online business yet my husband and I have been trying to promote our online store we put a new line of products we have offered 20 off orders over 99 dollars not really sure what we may be doing wrong. Can anyone offer advice or help???
Great Read!!! And being an Artist I love the images!!!
WOW! Super cool article. These four words are actually the key to making a sale. I believe that of these four, Free and You are the most powerful. Whenever, someone reads the word free, they get more attentive and start reading even more carefully.
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You know it’s those easy and cheezy CTA’s that always bring them in. Great reminder to get back to the basics of talking to the customer.
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